Wednesday, November 22, 2006

Unstable

If change is constant
Then we are permanent
Eternal on this flaming roller coaster
Emotional cocktail shaker of closer, lighter
Double the dose
I can’t tell if I’m penning a Valentine
Or spilling the lines of a Dear John with your damn name
But I don’t even have anything to walk away from
And I can’t pine and whine over the dissipation of dreams I wasn’t sure I wanted to have come true
No name to my feelings
No right to you
Whirlwind around me

As you close the door

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

You sound like a very weak person, why would you ever allow a man to put you in that position, just stupid!!
Maybe you got what you deserved....
What goes around, comes around

Dawn McSweeney said...

Lol, well, this was written a very long time ago. Funny how we grow, isn't it? But I am sorry you sound so angry.

annayra said...

The two first lines hold and encompass, cradle to the rest... Change is constant, we are permanent, love comes, love goes, and everything is. Lovely peace(and lovely slip of the pen, I meant piece) of feeling, Dawn.

annayra said...

The two first lines hold and encompass, cradle to the rest... Change is constant, we are permanent, love comes, love goes, and everything is. Lovely peace(and lovely slip of the pen, I meant piece) of feeling, Dawn.

Dawn McSweeney said...

Thank you for your words :)
I'm so very glad my poem reached you!